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It is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces

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June 28, 2022
in IELTS Writing, Agree or Disagree Essays, IELTS Writing Task 2
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You should spend about 40 minutes on IELTS writing task 2.

Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer

As we are progressing towards development and well-built infrastructure, many people claim that it is essential for cities to invest substantially in the creation of large outdoor public spaces. In my opinion, it is true that the authorities should invest in building huge outdoor spaces for the public, as it will promote tourism and public health. In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain my point of view in detail.

Primarily, as we are moving towards development, the demand for outdoor public space is also doubling. Outdoor public places are important for more than just aesthetic reasons. It provides a communal area for people to connect with nature and other people. It also allows youngsters to participate in a variety of outdoor activities, such as the famous Lodhi Garden of Delhi. This park helps appreciate the beauty of the town while also providing opportunities for people from various areas to come and spend leisure time and improve their general health.

Besides that, outdoor spaces also help to boost tourism. It attracts visitors from all over the world to view and enjoy the area’s natural beauty. New York City’s Central Park is a classic example. The city was well-known for business visits prior to its development. The construction of Central Park not only allowed locals to participate in a variety of activities but also attracted non-business visitors from all over the world.

However, some people think that spending too much money on outdoor spaces is a complete waste of money. But it is also equally true that we cannot overlook the reality of the growing demand for fresh air and greenery.

In conclusion, investing in outdoor spaces improves the look of a city and helps to promote tourism. Authorities should allocate a well-balanced budget based on the needs of the city’s growth.

Structure of the essay

You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side. So,

  • Do you agree that it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces?

(or)

  • Do you disagree that it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces?

Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it.

Don’t forget to state your opinion on it.

Question Paraphrased – As we are progressing towards development and well-built infrastructure, many people claim that it is essential for cities to invest substantially in the creation of large outdoor public spaces.

Opinion – In my opinion, it is true that the authorities should invest in building huge outdoor spaces for the public, as it will promote tourism and public health.

A thesis statement – In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain my point of view in detail.

Body Paragraph 1:

Central idea: Benefits of public outdoor areas

Supporting points:

  • Important, not only for aesthetic reasons
  • Provides opportunities to engage with other people
  • Improves quality of life

Body Paragraph 2:

Central idea: Ways outdoor spaces promotes tourism

Supporting points:

  • Enhances the area’s natural beauty
  • Boosts tourism
  • Promotes economic development

Conclusion:

Reiterated that investing in outdoor spaces improves the look of a city and helps to promote tourism and supported the side taken in the introduction.

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