• E-mail: admin@9ielts.com
  • Listening
    • IELTS Practice Tests
    • Recent Actual Tests
  • Reading
    • IELTS Practice Tests
    • Recent Actual Tests
  • Speaking
    • Speaking Part 1
    • Speaking Part 2
    • Speaking Part 3
  • Writing
    • General Training Writing Task 1
    • Academic Writing Task 1
      • Bar Chart
      • Line Graph
      • Pie Chart
      • Table
      • Map
      • Process Diagram
      • Mixed Charts
    • IELTS Writing Task 2
      • Advantages & Disadvantages Essays
      • Agree or Disagree Essays
      • Discuss Both Views Essays
      • Direct Questions Essays
      • Problems/Causes & Solutions Essays
  • Grammar
  • Vocabulary
    • Speaking Vocabulary
    • Writing Vocabulary
    • Collocations for IELTS
  • Books
  • Blog
No Result
View All Result
No Result
View All Result
Home IELTS Writing IELTS Writing Task 2

Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle

9IELTS by 9IELTS
July 18, 2022
in IELTS Writing Task 2, Agree or Disagree Essays, IELTS Writing
Reading Time: 2 mins read
72
VIEWS

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are equally responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.


Sample Answer:


We often hear of an escalating trend in children leading to feeble lifestyles in media. Although many believe that both parents and educational institutes share equal responsibility in addressing this growing problem, I disagree and feel that it is the utmost responsibility of the parents to change the unhealthy etiquette of adolescents.

Being the primary caretakers, parents spend most of the time with their children and parent’s eating habits influence them. Parents can become the role model for their children, by making healthy choices of what nutritious food they should have and physical activities to participate in that will main the equilibrium in life. For instance, if children observe that their parents prefer nutritious meal over junk food, exercise regularly to remain fit and participate in different sporting events or physical activities, child habits will change for the better. Being the guardian and mentor they can be very effective than schools in changing their lifestyle.

Furthermore, teaching institutes are primarily focused on providing elementary education to the students. Their job is to concentrate more on improving their skills, team building, help them in their coursework and develop their personality.  They usually have less time to look into their dietary plans or how they behave at home. Moreover, they cannot control what a child does in their spare time.

To conclude, I believe that only parents can effectively address the unhealthy ways of living of children. As primary caretakers, they are close to their children and their responsibility is more than that of schools.

[ by – Syed Tauseef ]

Previous Post

Some people think older employees are more useful to a company

Next Post

Some companies reward employees for exceptional work by giving them extra money

Leave a Reply Cancel reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

POPULAR POSTS

Cambridge IELTS 1-19 Book Series [PDF + Audio]

Cambridge IELTS 20 Academic [Update 2025]

Cambridge IELTS 19 Academic [PDF + Audio]

200 IELTS Speaking Sample Answers [PDF + Audio]

Cambridge IELTS 18 Academic [PDF + Audio]

IELTS Recent Actual Tests [Full PDF + Audio]

IELTS Listening Practice Test 204

IELTS Reading Practice Test 320

Cambridge IELTS 18 General Training [PDF + Audio]

Cambridge IELTS 17 General Training [PDF + Audio]

About Us

9ielts logo

9IELTS is dedicated to providing free materials and resources for IELTS conquerors. Stay constantly updated with a wide range of ultimate tips, strategies, and practice tests to crack the high-stakes IELTS exam!

Recent Posts

Education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide

Listening Practice Through Dictation 1, 2, 3, 4 [PDF + Audio]

UK students’ responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organised

Many people believe that television programs are of no value for children

It is important to be good at social interaction in order to get ahead at work

Disclaimer

The information on this site is for informational purposes only. IELTS is a registered trademark of the University of Cambridge ESOL, the British Council, and IDP Education Australia. This site and its owners are not affiliated, approved or endorsed by University of Cambridge ESOL, the British Council, or IDP Education Australia.
  • About Us
  • Contact Us
  • Disclaimer
  • Terms & Conditions
  • Privacy Policy

© 2024 9IELTS. All Rights Reserved.

No Result
View All Result
  • Listening
    • IELTS Practice Tests
    • Recent Actual Tests
  • Reading
    • IELTS Practice Tests
    • Recent Actual Tests
  • Speaking
    • Speaking Part 1
    • Speaking Part 2
    • Speaking Part 3
  • Writing
    • General Training Writing Task 1
    • Academic Writing Task 1
      • Bar Chart
      • Line Graph
      • Pie Chart
      • Table
      • Map
      • Process Diagram
      • Mixed Charts
    • IELTS Writing Task 2
      • Advantages & Disadvantages Essays
      • Agree or Disagree Essays
      • Discuss Both Views Essays
      • Direct Questions Essays
      • Problems/Causes & Solutions Essays
  • Grammar
  • Vocabulary
    • Speaking Vocabulary
    • Writing Vocabulary
    • Collocations for IELTS
  • Books
  • Blog

© 2024 9IELTS. All Rights Reserved.