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Home IELTS Writing IELTS Writing Task 2

Should parents read or tell stories to their children

9IELTS by 9IELTS
August 12, 2022
in IELTS Writing Task 2, Direct Questions Essays, IELTS Writing
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Should parents read or tell stories to their children or should the children be encouraged to read books, watch movies or TV all by themselves? Which point of view do you agree with?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer 1:


Children and teenagers are always fond of tales. This is one of the key reasons why many parents tell/read them bedtime stories. Whether the guardian should narrate stories for their kid or they should be left to watch TV/movies, has been one of the most debated topics of the recent times. Some people would argue that storytelling creates a great bonding between the children and their parents. Others claim that by this act children can never become self-dependent. In this essay both the aspects of this statement would be discussed.

Firstly, it is quite evident that parents who narrate tales to their children spend more time with them, as compared to those who don’t. This in a way strengthens their relationship. For instance, research around the world has shown that children are more attached to those individuals who spend more time with them. Thus, it is quite apparent that storytelling does play a key role in relationship building between the children and their parents.

Moreover, some argue that telling stories and in turn, spending more time with the kids does make them dependent on their parents. Take for example; the children who can keep themselves busy with books, movies etc. can adjust themselves in isolation from their parents if the situation demands so. Thus, it will help them grow personally and make them self-dependent.

After analysing both the aspects of this argument, it is quite evident that storytelling makes children highly dependent on their parents. But the effects it has on relationship building is something which cannot be neglected. Thus, it can be concluded that storytelling is very rewarding in terms of building relationships and every parent should indulge themselves in it. It is also believed that in the coming future more and more parents will realise the importance of storytelling and will engage themselves with their kids.

[ Written by – Pramod ]

Sample Answer 2:


Parents obviously play a major role in the way that develops their relationship with their children as they get older. Many people believe that parents should read or tell stories to their kids, while, others encourage that children may read books, watch TV or movies without parents. I strongly believe that parents can significantly impact on a child’s development with their tales. These arguments will be analysed prior to coming to a reasoned conclusion.

One of the main benefits of the tales told by the parents is that they talk only good sides of stories. For example, their tales are very interesting for their children. They tell about kings, animals, environments which kids can easily understand and believe. In addition, if the children listen to stories from their parents, they would be obedience to them. In this case, it can give more benefits for parents to control their children.

On the other hand, if children are encouraged for doing these things by themselves, it can lead to some drawbacks. For instance, if the children have access to television or the internet, it may bring bad fluency on their behaviour. On this way, they might develop bad and violent manners and behaviours. Moreover, today’s media provide a lot of shows which are about to make a bundle. These kinds of broadcasts impact on a child’s mind. So, they start to think about how they can make more money without difficulty. For this reason, they may lose their good study sphere.

In conclusion, after analysing these two points of view, it is believed that parent’s tales can provide a supportive, secure, and nurturing environment and interaction with kids, which is crucial for a child to become a good adult.

[ Written by – Sirojiddin ]

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