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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure

9IELTS by 9IELTS
June 28, 2022
in IELTS Writing, Agree or Disagree Essays, IELTS Writing Task 2
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You should spend about 40 minutes on IELTS writing task 2.

Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer

Travelling helps people to get away from a sedentary and often dull existence. Many people have begun to travel to foreign nations for enjoyment in recent years. Others think that travel may cause more harm than benefit to the nations visited. Travelling, in my opinion, helps people to open themselves up to different cultures and perspectives. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.

Seeing other parts of the world and gaining immersive experiences in foreign cultures is educational and can open people’s eyes in ways they never thought was possible. One becomes more aware of what is going on in other nations as a result of travel. It also allows an individual to meet new people and experience new things. It can also lead to new chances that they would never have imagined or dreamed about. One also gets to see the natural beauty of different parts of the world.

Additionally, travelling is less difficult. Travelling does not always need to cost millions of dollars. Nowadays, people have the option of going to places with cheap living costs. It also aids in the formation of meaningful connections. The people met while travelling may become some of their most valued contacts. Travelling may expose an individual to a wide range of lifestyles and cultures. Furthermore, the benefits of tourists spending foreign money in the nation would significantly boost the economy.

However, in a way, it might also be true that traveling to foreign countries devastates the local economy. Nevertheless, the tourism industry plays a significant role in the country’s economic development. It helps in creating employment opportunities for a large number of people.

In conclusion, there are numerous benefits of international travel which cannot be overlooked. Travelling benefits not just people but also countries.

Structure of the essay

You were given an opinion essay which means you had to pick a side. So,

  •      Do you agree that travelling to foreign countries for pleasure can leave a negative impact on the nations?

(or)

  •     Do you disagree that travelling to foreign countries for pleasure can leave a negative impact on the nations?

Once you pick a side, you can start planning your essay and then writing it.

Don’t forget to state your opinion on it.

Question Paraphrased – Traveling helps people to get away from a sedentary and often dull existence. Many people have begun to travel to foreign nations for enjoyment in recent years. Others think that travel may cause more harm than benefit to the nations visited.

Opinion – Traveling, in my opinion, helps people to open themselves up to different cultures and perspectives.

A thesis statement – In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.

Body Paragraph 1:

Topic: Advantages of travelling

Supporting points:

  • People learn and experience a foreign culture
  • Increases awareness of the world
  • People get to see the natural beauty of different regions

Body Paragraph 2:

Topic: Additional benefits of travelling

Supporting points:

  • Cheap travelling alternatives
  • Builds meaningful connections
  • Boosts economy

Conclusion:

Reiterated that travelling benefits not just people but also countries and supported the side taken in the introduction.

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