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Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children

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November 5, 2022
in IELTS Writing, Direct Questions Essays, IELTS Writing Task 2
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You should spend about 40 minutes on IELTS writing task 2.

Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children. Why do parents do this? Is this a positive or negative development for the children?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer

There has been a pervasive debate on the way of parenting, and the correct tinge of parenthood, and one of the most significant topics that are dragged into this discussion is the pressure given to children by their parents. In the upcoming paragraphs, I shall talk about the reasons for this and how this is a negative development for children.

The competition to survive today has been exceedingly predominant, thereby, making it extremely elephantine for the people today to sail through. Everyone wants to supersede and get through the best of the streets to get going with their respective stream of career and want to excel in all walks of life. However, such an environment has corroded the placidity of today’s generation. Parents know about the harsh and cacophonous realities of the world and, therefore, exert pressure on their children to get them to sprint on the ways of life. Moreover, the undue comparison and overambitious demeanor have skyrocketed in the modern world, which has exacerbated this pressure by the parents over their wards.

However, this pressure at times is unbearable for the sensitive minds of children to adapt positively. Time and again, it has been seen how owing to this thrust created on the younger children has jarred the gullible minds of young kids, and that often makes them grow up to be antisocial adults. This is iniquitous to the development of children. As per several surveys, such tormenting and excruciating dynamics in the households have made children suffer immensely, which even abrades the behavior of children at their schools, and with their peers, making them secluded and filling them with antipathy and pervading hostility against all. This is certainly a negative development for the children and society at large.

Conclusively, we could say that owing to the sense of rivalry and uncalled competition, parents tend to be putting their children under dissonance and tremendous pressure, which is harmful to the well-being of children.

Structure of the essay

You were given a direct question essay.

All you have to do with direct question essays is, answer the questions given in each body paragraph.

Introduction

Many a time there has been a pervasive debate on the way of parenting and the correct tinge of parenthood and one of the most significant topics that are dragged into this discussion is the pressure given to children by their parents. In the upcoming paragraphs, I shall talk about the reasons for this and how this is a negative development for children.

Body Paragraph 1

Central idea: Reasons why parents put a lot of pressure on their children.

Supporting points:
  • The competition and strife to survive today have been exceedingly predominant, thereby, making it extremely elephantine for the people today to sail through.
  • Everyone wants to supersede and get through the best of the streets to get going with their respective stream of career and want to excel in all walks of life, however, such an environment, has corroded the placidity of today’s generation.
  • Parents know about the harsh and cacophonous realities of the world and therefore, exert pressure on their children to get them to sprint on the ways of life. Moreover, the undue comparison and overambitious demeanor have skyrocketed in the modern world which has exacerbated this pressure by the parents over their wards.
Body Paragraph 2

Central idea: Reasons how this is a negative development for children.

Supporting points:
  • However, this pressure at times is unbearable for the sensitive minds of children to adapt positively.
  • Time and again it has been seen how owing to this thrust created on the younger children has jarred the gullible minds of young kids and that often makes them grow up to be antisocial adults.
  • This is iniquitous to the development of children. As per several surveys, such tormenting and excruciating dynamics in the households have made children suffer immensely which even abrades the behavior of children at their schools, and with their peers, making them secluded and filling them with antipathy and pervading hostility against all. This is certainly a negative development for the children and society, at large.
Conclusion

Conclusively, we could say that owing to the sense of rivalry and uncalled competition, parents tend to be putting their children under dissonance and tremendous pressure which is harmful to the well-being of children.

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