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Some companies sponsor sport and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves

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October 23, 2022
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some companies sponsor sport and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer 

It is true that a growing number of enterprises seek to promote their products and services through sport and sporting celebrities. While some people argue that this is a positive development, I agree with those who consider that the drawbacks outweigh the advantages.

On the one hand, sponsorship brings money into sport, and some believe that this benefits sport and business in general. Firstly, sponsorship and marketing are linked, and through television sports coverage, for example, both sport and companies profit. Sports, particularly minority sports such as cycling, are able to make the most of sponsorship to increase their popularity and encourage wider public participation. Secondly, as more money is poured into sport, sports stars are paid higher salaries and train full-time to raise their standards. Finally, in terms of advantages for businesses, associating their products with the healthy and popular image of sport enables them to enhance their public image and to break into new markets.

On the other hand, I support the opposing view that the entry of business money into sport has betrayed the Olympic ideal. Companies simply strive to gain a competitive edge over their rivals and to maximize their profits. Sports merchandising – like Nike and the National Basketball Association in the US – sometimes connects the product and the sport, but often it does not. Liverpool FC, for example, is sponsored by a bank. However, money in sport has resulted in a win-at-all-costs attitude, encouraging bribery or the use of illegal substances such as performance-enhancing drugs. Individual celebrities, like Cristiano Ronaldo, have gained a fortune from the endorsement of sporting goods, and enjoy millionaire lifestyles.

In conclusion, I totally agree with the critics of sponsorship in sport. While it has made profits for business, sponsorship has destroyed the sporting spirit of fun and fairness.

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Vocab Highlights

Vocabulary from sport:

sports coverage: the activity of reporting news related to sport

Example: Many top sports stars are now known to millions of people around the world because of global sports coverage by the media.

the Olympic ideal: the ultimate goal is not to win, but to know that you have taken part and done your best in a competition

Example: Unfortunately, professional sport is just another branch of the entertainment industry, and the Olympic ideal has been lost.

sports merchandising: the activity of selling products connected with a sport or sportsperson Example:    Sports merchandising is a multi-billion dollar business worldwide, in the form of t-shirts and sports equipment.

a win-at-all-costs attitude: an idea that a match or competition must be won, using all possible means

Example: Youth sport is being ruined by a win-at-all-costs attitude, which includes cheating and breaking the rules in order to achieve victory.

to use illegal substances: to use drugs or medicines which are not allowed under the rules of a competition

Example: In professional sport, it has become increasingly common to use illegal substances in order to win at all costs.

performance-enhancing drugs: drugs which improve the ability of a sportsperson to compete

Example: Athletes who take performance-enhancing drugs are not only cheating, but they also set a bad example for young people.

the endorsement of sporting goods: an advertising statement, usually by a famous sportsperson, saying that they use or like a particular product.

Example: In addition to their fabulous salaries, sports celebrities also make a great deal of money through their endorsement of sporting goods such as trainers or even casual clothes or deodorants!

Vocabulary from business and money:

to make the most of something: to make something appear as good as possible; to exploit something; to get as much out of something as is possible.

Example: They designed the advertisements to make the most of the product’s features.

to enhance their public image: to make their company appear more attractive to people

Example: In order to enhance their public image, some companies donate large sums of money to charities.

to break into a market: to enter a market with the connotation that entrance to the industry was difficult.

Example: It is difficult to break into the market for designer sportswear because there is too much competition from leading brands like Nike.

to gain a competitive edge: to achieve an advantage over another company or organisation, often by providing the same goods or services at a lower price

Example: The high quality of VW cars, combined with their affordable price, has enabled the company to gain a competitive edge over all its rivals in world markets.

to maximize profits: to increase profits to the highest possible level

Example: The company has hired a marketing consultant to recommend how to maximize profits next year.

Other vocabulary

to pour into [phrasal verb]: to provide a large amount of money for something

Examples: Millions of dollars are being poured into the development of a new vaccine for coronavirus.

bribery [noun]: the act of giving money or something valuable to somebody in return for their help – often to do something dishonest

Example: It was discovered that the bribery of the referee was responsible for the shock result of the football match.

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