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Some health professionals suggest that older people spend more time socializing with others

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November 5, 2022
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Some health professionals suggest that older people spend more time socializing with others and playing sports to stay healthy, but many retired people have experienced loneliness and a lack of fitness. Why has this happened? What can be done to address this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer

The population today is suffering from various health ailments as per various surveys. From their mental health to physical well-being, people seem to be falling apart at the brinks. This issue is even more pronounced in our older generation. This situation has deteriorated even more given the retired and elderlies are not engaged in social activities and physical vigour. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall talk about the causes of this menace and the possible solutions to mitigate it.

It is pervasively seen how the older section of our society is agonized and secluded owing to various reasons and dynamics of the modern world. The first and the foremost cause of that is the over-ballooning population and the competition thereof. It has been seen and observed how people tend to forget to live while they earn when their major priorities should have revolved around living more than existing. This has caused them to overlook the human foreground and their prime responsibilities, which are to spend time with their kins and pals. The affliction of older people being left all by themselves without getting their emotional needs satiated is the root effect of this phenomenon. Secondly, digitalization and the unwavering velocity of digital gradations have been nailing the plight of the older generation. Where people were seen more engrossed in the physical activities in the earlier times, be it walking, strolling, or engaging in social titbits, today has been badly abrogated with the advent of digital convenience. This has acutely abraded the mental well-being of senior citizens.

Talking about the possible remedies to extenuate such harrowing experiences of senior citizens shall be to, first of all, realize that something needs to be done about making them feel exuberant, loved, and bringing them to the exhilaration of life. Our procrastination has severely decayed the spirit out of our elder generation. Talking about all the aspects of health, emotional and mental well-being are the most essential of them all, and if this is dabbled up with, the whole essence of living is rendered sullied. Secondly, they need to be motivated to be a part of social activities and hearty discussions. Time and again, it has been proved how making one feel good about themselves has miraculously worked for the status of one’s health owing to the release of dopamine and serotonin. In addition to that, instilling the essence of adding healthy vigour in

their daily regime shall be extremely important in this regard, and hence, they should be encouraged to be physically active.

Hence, in conclusion, it could be said that older generations are being seen getting in the shades of dilapidation and loneliness. However, instilling the aforementioned solutions would remarkably upgrade their life.

Structure of the essay

You were given a cause/solution question essay for which you had to talk about the cause and the solution to the problem.

Once you are clear about the causes you are going to write about in your essay, you can start planning your essay and then writing it.

Introduction

The population today is suffering from various health ailments as per various surveys. Right from their mental health to physical well-being, people seem to be falling apart at the brinks. This issue is even more pronounced in our older generation. This situation has deteriorated even more given the retired and elderlies are not engaged in social activities and physical vigor. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall talk about the causes of this menace and the possible solutions to mitigate it.

Body paragraph 1- Causes
  • It is pervasively seen how the older section of our society is agonized and secluded owing to various reasons and dynamics of the modern world. The first and the foremost cause of that is the over-ballooning population and the competition thereof.
  • It has been seen and observed how people tend to forget to live while they earn when their major priorities should have revolved around living more than existing. This has caused them to overlook the human foreground and their prime responsibilities which are to spend time with their kins and pals. The affliction of older people being left all by themselves without getting their emotional needs satiated is the root effect of this phenomenon.
  • The digitalization and the unwavering velocity of digital gradations have been nailing the plight of the older generation. Where people were seen more engrossed in the physical activities in the earlier times, be it walking, strolling, or engaging in social titbits, today has been badly abrogated with the advent of digital convenience. This has acutely abraded the mental well-being of senior citizens.
Body paragraph 2- Solutions
  • Talking about the possible remedies to extenuate such harrowing experiences of senior citizens shall be to, first of all, realize that something needs to be done about making them feel exuberant, loved, and bringing them to the exhilaration of life.
  • Our procrastination has severely decayed the spirit out of our elder generation. Talking about all the aspects of health, emotional and mental well-being are the most essential of them all, and if this is dabbled up with, the whole essence of living is rendered sullied.
  • They need to be motivated to be a part of social activities and hearty discussions. Time and again it has been proved how making one feel good about themselves has miraculously worked for the status of one’s health owing to the release of dopamine and serotonin.
  • In addition to that, instilling the essence of adding healthy vigor in their daily regime shall be extremely important in this regard, and hence, they should be encouraged to be physically active.
Conclusion

Hence, in conclusion, it could be said that older generations are being seen getting in the shades of dilapidation and loneliness. However, instilling the aforementioned solutions would remarkably upgrade their life.

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